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Spider-man Family 5 p5 by ~Clayton-Henry:iconClayton-Henry:

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Page 5 from Spider-man Family. Peter is being summoned by Doctor Strange.

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~FlowComa Oct 25, 2007, 8:36:58 PM
Very cool Clayton, is this the one you inked yourself?

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~GMGuity Oct 25, 2007, 8:37:53 PM
I just happened to read this over in a Barnes & Noble magazine rack this afternoon. I tell you, it's amazing how much more enjoyable the OUT of continuity stuff from Marvel is right now. I especially liked this story and the one featuring Kraven, Man-Wolf #2 and the two socialites. THAT is what Marvel is supposed to be about, man...

But that's just me. :-)
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*davidyardin Oct 25, 2007, 9:11:11 PM
That second panel is sweet!

Just a very minor suggestion from something Phil Jimenez told me, that kind of stuck with me. When you have a person flying, leaping (i.e. body not supported by anything in mid air) try not to crop their body, like Spidey's butt in panel 3. You just needed to nudge him to the right half a centimetre to show nothing is supporting him off panel, and his leap would be conveyed a lot better.

Great page all the same.

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=thelearningcurv Oct 25, 2007, 10:00:36 PM
very fly, can't wait to see this issue=]

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~TPollockJR Oct 25, 2007, 10:23:47 PM
Bro, your work is amazing. Been a fan since Dracula/Apocalypse...

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~BrattyBen Oct 25, 2007, 11:43:18 PM
I think the great thing about this page, is how you have Spidey following Wong. It stays true to the character, and provides great visual contrast and interest.

I dunno. Something about this page really speaks to me. Nice job!!!

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~ninjai Oct 26, 2007, 12:22:34 AM
Good stuff man! Very clean, dynamic! I was thinking that it might have made a better transition from panel 1 to 2 to have him on his back and falling even though i'm sure the readers can make the connection that he flipped over on his back, the angle of his body seems a bit awkward.

I also think maybe some ghosting images of him flipping down on panel three or a couple speed lines to show his movement a little better.

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*kellistrator Oct 26, 2007, 12:58:21 AM
clayton, your work always stands out...lovely.
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*eduardogarciag Oct 26, 2007, 4:52:21 AM
denitly this page its excellent i liked so much the composition of the page....also yuour inks are so good!! =)
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